Wednesday 9 March 2011

Do you have jordans Game instead of shoe game??? =)


   Now days, most people associate a person of having "shoe game" if they have
a) alot of jordans
b) have the latest jordans that had came out
  I personally feel you may have "shoe game" if the shoes you wear appear fascinating, interesting and styling to most. if they know how to chose other brand types of shoes that are just as stylish as jordans, and different. Yes indeed a lot of people have jordans and think they are the most styling shoe there is out there; however, how is one associated with "shoe game" if the only part of the shoe game is jordans. A better name for the reasoning would be "J game" not shoe, because there are more individuals out there that have all types of brand name shoes and more that are fascinating, interesting and styling to most but is not associated with the "shoe game". To those whom are out there who knows how to "rock" all types of shoes and look stylish koodos to you, for you are the real people with the "shoe game". !!!

2 comments:

  1. Hey, I am a fellow eziner and I noticed a few mistakes in here that I just wanted to point out.

    - A lot is two words.
    - There are a few capitalization errors throughout here, I'd suggest reading over and fixing those.
    - In the last underlined part, you don't need the period after "shoe game" as you have exclamation points.
    - After you say why it should be called J-game, you say "there are more individuals out there that have all types...but is not associated with the 'shoe game.'" The word is should be changed to "are," as you are talking about all kinds of shoes, and not just a shoe.

    Sorry for being such a grammar Nazi :)

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  2. Oh porteria, You make me chuckle.

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