Tuesday 8 February 2011

Kebriana Nash Opinion lead:

        Compare/contrast lead:
   When i was a kid the educational shows such as reading rainbow was very entertaining and helpful for me as a young reader. The show had showed me the true meaning for picking a book up and reading the story. Now days the educational shows has either been replaced or removed from broadcast. It is less fortunate for the new incoming generation for they would not get the chance to learn from the great experience of reading. The main concern of this is would your child or any incoming generation of children be inspired to read and be interested in it?
       Direct address lead:
   when your a kid you usually watch television a lot because it is interesting, but you never notice how educational a show may be, until you start remembering word from word. The show reading rainbow was that show where your child may have watched and enjoyed without noticing how educational it may had been for them it had caused for them to become interested in books and reading. To loose a show like this is a huge disadvantage for those kids who had actually watched and learned without even noticing.
          Narrative lead:
     On the day that the report cards had came in telling what reading level your child may be on, little johnny had became attached to reading. little johnny report card was not near the grade average reading level that he should have been on. His parents had tried to teach and tutor him how to read but little johnny already knew how to do that.  Little Johnny’s parents were becoming very disturb on why their son was not on the correct reading level as needed if he knows how to read. Until one day they had seen little johnny watching a show that introduced little johnny to the meaning of actually reading a book. The next report card had came in and little johnny ha improve within his reading level he had actually became interested into reading.

3 comments:

  1. I would go with the first one. It might need a little work, but I think it has a good, thoughtful nature to it.

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  2. I think the first one has the most potential, but I'd try to make the reader feel as though he/she was there. Describe what it was like for you to sit down in front of Reading Rainbow, what you learned, and how it had a lasting effect. Then you could surprise the reader by explaining that this valuable program has been taken off the air.

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